Saturday, 23 May 2026
When You Burn Me, by Lorelei Johnson
Sienna is a light witch, raised by her aunt in a progressive coven after the death of her parents when she was a child. They were guardians of the light, brutally murdered by a vicious dark coven, the Order of Erris, seeking what they were guarding.
So there is consternation in her coven when Sienna finds herself both under threat from the Order and entangled with a dark warlock. Can she trust him when he says he wants to help her against the Order, or does Damon have his own agenda?
This independently published dark fantasy novel has a high quality look and feel. Unfortunately the contents don’t quite live up to it. While the characters are well drawn, the plot is unconvincing and the text is riddled with typos. It’s a pity more wasn’t spent on the editing and proofreading, rather than the paper quality and cover art.
With the best will in the world to support independent local authors, the meh storyline does not inspire the impetus to read the further two books in the Enchanted Hearts series.
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